Wow, this is a convincing Lily and certainly a convincing manipulation over all. Good job. Oh Gods and Severus' expression breaks my heart. I never feel pity for him as an adult but I do pity him as a youngster. I was always sceptical about his love for Lily though. His feelings seem to me more of a greatful attachment because she is one of very few who tries to be nice to him. A puppy love if you will? I was never at ease with the big love idea.
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Date: 2007-09-14 02:20 pm (UTC)